Does this looks okay? (Death of a character, trying to make it seem really emotional)?

Have you ever read a decent book before? I'm serious. You might want to do that first before trying to write a story. One more thing, Twilight doesn't count. I said decent.

How to have nice hair for men?

by the way what is a brazilian blowout? I don't know of any brands of anything,but you could try a haircut that suits the texture of your hair and your bone structure,I think this is the best thing.Try to condition your hair every day with a very good conditioning and don't wash your hair everyday as well.I heard that olive oil is very good for dry coarse hair like yours,not sure about it.

Are kosher meats raised humanely?

I know about kosher slaughter, but are the animals raised humanely, such as in areas large enough to walk around?

There are certain things that are looked down at in marriage in my culture. Do you think practices are unfair?

bro i can believe what I am hearing it is your life not theirs unless you are in india do what you want man go live your life if they dont approve then thats too bad all you have to do is tell them thats what makes you happy

Guys, would you date an exotic girl?

would you date a girl that was hispanic, indian, asian, black etc? im asking this question because im sri lankan and find that white guys rarely ever approach me. while other races like black or hispanic guys have approached me. is it because i'm intimadating possibly or is it cause white guys just prefer white girls? i prefer all races and am open minded, but i've only dated non white guys. im rarely the type of girl to go out there and talk to a guy though. are white guys more shy?

I'm old and grumpy. Can you help?

Well, putting in comedy or romance always makes things more exciting and "happier". I think the last 2 sound good and if you'd like them less depressed then add one of the 2 to the story. Or put something that you desire into a story that'd mix things up ! I also agree with the person above me saying the thing like "Harry Potter is rarely happy but desires happiness" lol . That all the things I can think of . By the way the 1st story sounds a lot like an Edgar Allen Poe story :):) Good Luck !

Dog best suited for Indian conditions?

i do live in a 3000 sq ft house.but with less outdoor area.which means less space for any activities to keep my dog healthy.keeping this in mind please do suggest me a breed